Friday, June 3, 2011

Introduction to Revision Piece

         For our second paper in the “Community Unit”, we were supposed to write an essay answering this question: “As a result of your readings and interview, how can you argue for a specific function of communities in our lives?” I started out good but I needed deeper analysis. So, after I read the instructor’s comments, I decided to go back and add some more ideas to my essay. Due to limited length, I only revised the first page of my essay.    

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